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Is it worth it?
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Is it worth it? |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
I am missing out on seeing you in the morning I am missing out on holding your hand, I am missing out on your touch, hearing your voice, seeing your smile. I long for you, but I know, I can never have you. Remind me again Why it's worth it? |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
That's good, the first part with exception to the last 3 lines, sounds like it belongs in a greeting card. Maybe you should try to submit that. Good Job! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Tulip Now THAT is poignant! There is real meat in the way you brought that last line in. (geesh, Long John, you'd better hope lil Tulip isn't a vegetarian!) |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Thanks guys! No vegetarian here!!! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow...I know exactly what you are saying with this one. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Hoot_owl_rn, It stinks, doesn't it? Why does life have to be so difficult, when it used to be so simple? |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Tulip...If I knew the answer to that question, I would probably be writing books on the subject and selling them for a living and living in Beverly Hills....the person who figures love out is going to make a mint! Ruth ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Hmmm... Beverly Hills sounds pretty nice about now... |
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