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Cinderella Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 152Arizona |
My thoughts, my feelings are oh so happy That this my poem will sound somewhat crappie. How can anyone have that unique glow Like all the colors of the rainbow? My dog named Buckwheat has finally learned, As he lifted one leg and then turned Seeing me beam as a mother will often do. Surprised my words were loving, not no-no-no. My training and pleading has made him today The greatest joy that has come my way. How wonderful it is I do not have the feat To remind him again "please lower the seat"! Teaching men is harder than their best pals But please guys have feelings for us gals. That damn water is COLD, it feels like a blast In the darkness of the night when it touches your ass.  [This message has been edited by Cinderella (edited 07-26-99).] |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
thanks for the chuckle...i am still grinning  ------------------ If I had my mouth I would bite. If I had my liberty I would do my liking. In the mean time, let me be that I am, and seek not to alter me. ~~~Shakespeare~~~ |
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Crystal Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 62Hazel Park Mi U.S.A. |
Very funny, yet so true...lol good poem "back to the top!" |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Cinder-gal I read your poem with a small frown, You women are spoiled by our love. You ask us to put the seat back down, Why don't YOU put the seat back up?!! lol - I loved your poem. BTW - I not only put the seat back down, I also put the lid back down, too. So there! (snooty sniff with head thrown back) |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
LOL.....Oh geez, I gave up on the hubby training. (Maybe that's why we're divorcing!!! Revelation!!..LOL) Actually, now I have to teach my little boy....Here we go again!!! Oh by the way...my doggie, who is male, (from time to time) widdles like a girl....I wonder if that's because of my training techniques??..oops  Thanks for the laugh. |
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Cinderella Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 152Arizona |
Elvira, Crystal and Sally I am so glad you concur with me-but LngJhnAg you deserve a gold star for learning to put the seat down but why the lid (hope it is a soft one)? |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
At the great risk of sounding anal, I too lower the seat when done...but I really love lowering the top lid during the cold, harsh winter nights. You know the kind of lid...unshagged, unpadded, straight from the hip porcelain. I already know I'm going to hell, so I might as well kick back, enjoy the ride, and laugh my tiny-hiny off. Alicat the persnickity kitty |
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Cinderella Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 152Arizona |
Alicat as Mother Nature says "Not Nice" |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, alicat! I don't mean to sound like such a critic But, must you be so anal-ytic? |
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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
I like the piece, but you don't really think that men will put the seat down all the time now do you? I think that I have now gotten my husband to do that.. Oh well, all things take time.. As for you Alicat, I'm glad that you know that you are going to hell in a handbag.. heheh Love, Lady ------------------ Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. [This message has been edited by Ladycat (edited 08-01-99).] |
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Cinderella Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 152Arizona |
Good for you Ladycat! We have to stick together. And of course "Deer" thanks for being on my side and you being a MALE too! |
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