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~forever Never Comes~

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Princess Lily
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0 posted 07-26-99 12:31 AM       View Profile for Princess Lily   Email Princess Lily   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Princess Lily

The word forever is such a sad thing.
You know those friends that you cherish so much.The one that say they'll be your friends FOREVER.Forever never comes.You know that man at the office.yeah the one you're having an affair with.He says he'll love you FOREVER.Well, forever never comes.You know that woman that you are sleeping with.You know the one that your wife doesn't know about.You whisper in her ear-"it will be like this forever".FOREVER never comes.It is quite sad how just about everyday you hear the word FOREVER.But I guess the really sad thing about it is forever never comes.


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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe

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poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 07-26-99 12:36 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

The word "forever" makes many hearts bitter....
AMEN, preach it sister!! LOL I like it alot.

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"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

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I agree, forever is a word much to often used and very seldom meant. Great job!!

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"It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter
Princess Lily
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3 posted 07-26-99 12:58 AM       View Profile for Princess Lily   Email Princess Lily   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Princess Lily

Thank you very much for the replies.It is so often that people say forever.Even I sometimes slip but very seldomly because i know how much it hurts.

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe


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4 posted 07-26-99 05:12 AM       View Profile for Artur Hawkwing   Email Artur Hawkwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artur Hawkwing

The word forever stands among ranks of the most powerful words ever used, when meant as it was meant to be. Good one!
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5 posted 07-26-99 02:15 PM       View Profile for Princess Lily   Email Princess Lily   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Princess Lily

Thank you very much arthur.
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