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poetFemmeFatale
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0 posted 07-25-99 10:44 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Once upon a mystic night
I dreamt that I had taken flight
Off to a land so pure and true
Off to a land...just me and you.

We walked along a crystal stream
By night we loved - by day we'd dream
Of all things great and small and true
Of blissful things - of me and you.

We slept beneath the silky air
I reached for you...and you were there
To pull me close - caress my soul
You left me breathless - You made me whole...


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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

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1 posted 07-26-99 12:17 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

This poem left ME breathless. It flows very well.
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2 posted 07-31-99 07:50 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

i remember the first time i had this feeling, it overtook my body, thanx for letting me recapture that moment i thought was forgotten!
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3 posted 08-13-99 11:00 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I'm bringing this one back because I'd like a bit more input on it...at one time it was one of my favorites, but maybe it's not so great !

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

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4 posted 08-13-99 04:34 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I hadn't seen it before...I'm glad you brought it back. I assume it was one of your favorites because of what it made you feel...and now it 'may not be so great' because of what others feel. Don't fall into that trap. If you think it's great....it is. Other peoples comments, or lack of, should not change how you feel about your work. Enough soapbox talk from me. Don't you ever worry about input as long as I'm around!
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5 posted 08-13-99 04:37 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Now listen here missy! (does that sound like your old sweet grannie?)...you are one of the better poets around...I like all your stuff. It's a shame when something as good as this gets buried...glad you resurrected it!
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