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I'm letting go.

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poetFemmeFatale
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Arkansas


0 posted 07-25-99 09:11 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I'm letting go of skies not blue
of prayers not answered -
of me and you...
I'm letting go of fairy-tale dreams
of songs of love -
of hidden things.
I'm letting go all thoughts of you
when we were one -
but now we're two.
I'm letting go the hopes I had
I'm smiling though -
not looking sad.
I'm letting go of love so right
we could have had -
all through the night...
I'm letting go of memories
that try to shine -
on lonely seas.
I'm letting go of you my dear
I'll say "So long..."
without one tear.........


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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

© Copyright 1999 Gennifer David - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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In the space between moments


1 posted 07-25-99 09:52 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Reminds me of something a dear friend of mine went through...wonderful job. It shows a lot of hope and strength.

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*Krista Knutson*

"It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter
r. baker33
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since 07-03-99
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glen easton wv


2 posted 07-25-99 10:21 PM       View Profile for r. baker33   Email r. baker33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit r. baker33's Home Page   View IP for r. baker33

Hey thanks for the reply.actually the poem
that you read was a modified version of one
I had written 6 years ago. when I split
with my wife.I can identify with with what
you said.its truely amazing how for some of
us how we can take lifes hurts,and
heartaches,and turn them around,and create
such wonderful poems.your poem letting go
was beautiful. well spoken.I liked it very
much.this world would be much nicer if more
people could do this!
Severn
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since 07-17-99
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3 posted 07-25-99 10:21 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

This is lovely, I like the way it flows and it really moves me. (Thanks for your enthusiasm for my poem 'Seaside Cell" - it's very special to me.)
r. baker33
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since 07-03-99
Posts 55
glen easton wv


4 posted 07-25-99 10:30 PM       View Profile for r. baker33   Email r. baker33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit r. baker33's Home Page   View IP for r. baker33

ooops I didn't realize the title was
"im letting go" sorry for the error.
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