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The Quest

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poetFemmeFatale
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0 posted 07-25-99 03:57 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

The Quest that I've begun
will lead me to the key
that unlocks every door
as far as eye can see...

Happiness there will I find -
True love & understanding
Doorways to all my wildest dreams
In a world that's so demanding...

The light of brightest Violet
my aura all around -
I'll bathe my every breath in her
TIll peace and joy be found...

My mind...a tool of wonder
My soul...a blissful breeze
I now can heal my broken spirit
and set my heart at ease.
© Copyright 1999 Gennifer David - All Rights Reserved
tori
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1 posted 07-25-99 04:37 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Great Job here Fatale!! wish I found the key..
I'm thinking..!!
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2 posted 08-24-99 11:16 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Found a hidden gem! Lovely poem PFF....
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 08-25-99 12:16 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

PFF,
A lovely little poem very pleasant to read
Alwye
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4 posted 08-25-99 01:09 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Beautiful...I'd like to get my hands on that key. Exellent work, I've come to expect it from you. Lovely.

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller


sea_of_okc
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5 posted 08-25-99 08:37 AM       View Profile for sea_of_okc   Email sea_of_okc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sea_of_okc

A beautiful poem femme. I have come to think of your aura as passionate reds and bright yellows but if you think purple...well...hmmm
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6 posted 08-25-99 07:48 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Beautiful, PFF! I loved this one-it feels very peaceful. I like the soul-breeze metaphor.

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7 posted 08-25-99 10:10 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Ah...now this is really nice. I should like to print this out and read it over and over, especially on stressful days. Wonderful!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
poetFemmeFatale
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8 posted 08-26-99 12:12 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Thanks to all ! To Sea, my grandmother is the one who is into Aura's and such, I would like to see myself as more "electric & vivid", however she insists my aura is a calming peaceful violet...I am a peacekeeper at heart though, so maybe she knows what she's talking about. My personality is colorful, but my soul is calm....I fight with no one, however if provoked repeatedly, I eventually speak up and then boy, look out !! LOL

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"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Andrew Scott
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9 posted 08-27-99 12:31 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Of late I havn't had much time to read, so I'm looking up some of those gems that got away. I echo the sentiments of all those who have come before... this is quite beautiful. A fine quest indeed. Thanks for sharing.
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10 posted 08-27-99 06:02 PM       View Profile for traveler   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for traveler

Elizabeth is right ... the soul/breeze metaphor is very nice ... such a shame all all locks don't share the same key ... gotta find those keys on our own ...
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