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poetFemmeFatale
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0 posted 1999-07-25 03:57 PM


The Quest that I've begun
will lead me to the key
that unlocks every door
as far as eye can see...

Happiness there will I find -
True love & understanding
Doorways to all my wildest dreams
In a world that's so demanding...

The light of brightest Violet
my aura all around -
I'll bathe my every breath in her
TIll peace and joy be found...

My mind...a tool of wonder
My soul...a blissful breeze
I now can heal my broken spirit
and set my heart at ease.

© Copyright 1999 Gennifer David - All Rights Reserved
tori
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1 posted 1999-07-25 04:37 PM


Great Job here Fatale!! wish I found the key..
I'm thinking..!!
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Poet deVine
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2 posted 1999-08-24 11:16 PM


Found a hidden gem! Lovely poem PFF....
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 1999-08-25 12:16 PM


PFF,
A lovely little poem very pleasant to read

Alwye
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4 posted 1999-08-25 01:09 AM


Beautiful...I'd like to get my hands on that key. Exellent work, I've come to expect it from you. Lovely.

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller



sea_of_okc
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5 posted 1999-08-25 08:37 AM


A beautiful poem femme. I have come to think of your aura as passionate reds and bright yellows but if you think purple...well...hmmm
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6 posted 1999-08-25 07:48 PM


Beautiful, PFF! I loved this one-it feels very peaceful. I like the soul-breeze metaphor.

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*Elizabeth*

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But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

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7 posted 1999-08-25 10:10 PM


Ah...now this is really nice. I should like to print this out and read it over and over, especially on stressful days. Wonderful!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

poetFemmeFatale
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8 posted 1999-08-26 12:12 PM


Thanks to all ! To Sea, my grandmother is the one who is into Aura's and such, I would like to see myself as more "electric & vivid", however she insists my aura is a calming peaceful violet...I am a peacekeeper at heart though, so maybe she knows what she's talking about. My personality is colorful, but my soul is calm....I fight with no one, however if provoked repeatedly, I eventually speak up and then boy, look out !! LOL

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet


Andrew Scott
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9 posted 1999-08-27 12:31 PM


Of late I havn't had much time to read, so I'm looking up some of those gems that got away. I echo the sentiments of all those who have come before... this is quite beautiful. A fine quest indeed. Thanks for sharing.
traveler
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10 posted 1999-08-27 06:02 PM


Elizabeth is right ... the soul/breeze metaphor is very nice ... such a shame all all locks don't share the same key ... gotta find those keys on our own ...
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