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Where Lover's Never Weep

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poetFemmeFatale
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0 posted 07-25-99 03:35 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

A night or so ago -
The winds began to blow -
And with these winds came thunder,lightning,rain.

Outside, the sky turned black -
Tears were falling,"Hold them back..."
That voice from far away called me by name.

My spirit rose to sail -
To that land of fairy-tale -
And suddenly, up rode a shining knight.

That stranger took my hand -
Whispered words of love so grand -
And took me to his castle for the night.

I was his princess fair -
Not a question did I dare -
Along the shores of love we rode till dawn.

His tides soon washed away -
All my tears of yesterday -
But alas, when I awoke, my knight was gone.

This land of fairy-tale
Is but a dream to keep -
This place known as
"Where Lover's Never Weep."
© Copyright 1999 Gennifer David - All Rights Reserved
elvira
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1 posted 07-25-99 08:56 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

excellent form!...Welcome to the forum pFF
poetFemmeFatale
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2 posted 08-30-99 09:18 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Jeeze Man ! How long does a girl have to look for a shining knight ? You should be able to pick one up at the supermarket or something !? Through the Drive-Through! LOL I'll have ONE to go, oh....uh....could you SUPER SIZE "that" ???!!! ha ha ha he he he ho ho !!! get it ?

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3 posted 08-30-99 10:43 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

I get it, PFF! Great poem, excellently written.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

Michael
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4 posted 08-30-99 12:44 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Beautiful piece.
Your sentiment shines.


Michael
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5 posted 08-30-99 07:31 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Knight though I am, with Darkness I shine.

Rescuing you fair damsel would be my pleasure.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvilŠ


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6 posted 08-30-99 07:55 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Great piece!
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7 posted 08-30-99 11:41 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Looks like this must have been your first poem - marvellous, and so wistful. Keep dreaming, friend.
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8 posted 04-17-2004 02:00 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I love this! I knew I'd like it, just by the title
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