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This indeed I pray...(poem of suicide)

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poetFemmeFatale
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Death please come to end my jouney
My soul can take no more...
Make me sleep and ne're awaken
Upon endless billows soar...

Like a bird that's been set free
All troubles left behind...
If only I could take you with me
Our souls would be entwined...

How unimportant my next breath is
I've completely given in...
How peaceful death sounds to my ears
The storms rage deep within.
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I felt this one. Unfortunately, I didn't feel any sense of delivery making it more powerful. So I will see it as an unfinished part of life. I long for the sense of renewal, release from pain that is not so final. Enjoyed!
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2 posted 07-25-99 08:11 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Well said, poetFemmeFatale. I have felt this way before. Good work.
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Wonderful work.I have tried to kill myself and understand this very well.If you are really feeling this way i suggest that you really think about what life has to offer.

brought back memories.Well written.

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amber
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4 posted 07-31-99 07:52 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

i can still feel my moments of desperation, and times when i felt i would never be anything to anyone, including myself, very beautiful poem.
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I also still feel moments of desparation. Such a sadly true poem. So many of us have felt this way before. Excellent, poetFemmeFatale.

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