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This indeed I pray...(poem of suicide)
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This indeed I pray...(poem of suicide) |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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Death please come to end my jouney My soul can take no more... Make me sleep and ne're awaken Upon endless billows soar... Like a bird that's been set free All troubles left behind... If only I could take you with me Our souls would be entwined... How unimportant my next breath is I've completely given in... How peaceful death sounds to my ears The storms rage deep within. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
I felt this one. Unfortunately, I didn't feel any sense of delivery making it more powerful. So I will see it as an unfinished part of life. I long for the sense of renewal, release from pain that is not so final. Enjoyed! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Well said, poetFemmeFatale. I have felt this way before. Good work. |
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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
Wonderful work.I have tried to kill myself and understand this very well.If you are really feeling this way i suggest that you really think about what life has to offer. brought back memories.Well written. ------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe [This message has been edited by Princess Lily (edited 07-26-99).] |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
i can still feel my moments of desperation, and times when i felt i would never be anything to anyone, including myself, very beautiful poem. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I also still feel moments of desparation. Such a sadly true poem. So many of us have felt this way before. Excellent, poetFemmeFatale. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks |
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