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Whisper Magic

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poetFemmeFatale
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0 posted 07-25-99 02:55 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Whisper...whisper to my soul
Magic words to make me whole
Mystic is your soul with mine...
You and I...merge...entwine.

The love we share is mystic - mental...
Distance - Time - accidental.
Dream of me as night befalls you...
The moon above shines simply for you.
© Copyright 1999 Gennifer David - All Rights Reserved
Ohme
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1 posted 07-25-99 03:03 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

A beautiful sensation.
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2 posted 07-25-99 04:33 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

except for the rhyme of the last 2 lines, it is excellent.
Poet deVine
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3 posted 07-25-99 05:21 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! This is good. I look forward to reading the others you posted today!

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Thank You all for your words of encouragement! I'm flattered to hear from the Best Of The Best!! I've been reading much of your work before I decided to post my own & have already become fans of many of you!! Much of my poetry is erotic though, poet Devine, you are truly one of my favorites!!!! Thanks for your comments!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Alwye
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In the space between moments


5 posted 07-25-99 09:29 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Beautiful...I love it.

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*Krista Knutson*

"It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter
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