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Writer's Withdrawal
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I've got something worse than disease, it's called Writer's Withdrawal. Can anyone help me, someone please? I feel like I'm a rag doll. I didn't know I had it until, just a month ago, today. I had no idea why I felt ill, just took no joy in each day. Twelve years worth of creativity, was thrown right out the window. Literary inactivity, tainted everything I know. A month ago, I slipped up you see, I told a friend that I wrote. She made me come post my poetry, she did it to get my goat. Now I get my daily writing fix, I just write a verse or two. Ron, in spite of the recent conflicts, I'd just like to say, "Thank you." ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
And what does it take to get your goat, in case I ever want to give you a prod?? Thanks DreamEvil I'm one of your fans! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well done, Dream, and worthy of respect. |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
Poetry IS and this most definitely IS poetry Well done |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
DReam.. you are a noble guy... I admire you... ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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Angel_of_Music Junior Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 35Sanger, TX USA |
well hello..........nice to know I inspire your poetry. :-) I'm watching you.........never forget. ------------------ "In sleep he sang to me...in dreams he came...that voice which calls to me, and speaks my name..." |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Thanks. [This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 07-26-99).] |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
JP, if you have something constructive to say, good or bad, everything would love to hear it. Sarcasm, on the other hand, isn't welcome here. [This message has been edited by rcarnell (edited 07-25-99).] |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wonderful, Dream. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Withdrawal..headache...jittery feeling... can't sit still...been there my friend. It ain't pretty! Good poem.  |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
I'm not impressed. The idea is good, the content is sound, the structure...... needs work. I will not let you skate by on half-assed work my friend, you have talent and I would like to see you use it. Bring on the thoughtful work. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Thanks for bringing this up to the top, JP. Very kind of you. |
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leelew Member
since 1999-07-10
Posts 89highmount,ny,usa |
What a truly frightening poem!!Is there a charm against writers withdrawL?!?! Very well done!! |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Very well done indeed! The idea and emotions in this poem are truly genuine. The structure fits the purpose of this poem perfectly. I see that it's about a writer that has gone many many moons without touching pen to paper, and finally giving it a shot. Intentional imperfections! Thank you for posting this. |
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