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r. baker33
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since 1999-07-03
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glen easton wv

0 posted 1999-07-25 02:50 AM


In Gods eyes we are not just people.
we are souls of his creation.
made from his image,and as like his son
Jesus,and as individual as the peddles each
of a rose.
in the masters eyes he alone sees us all
as naked as the day we were born.
he sees what we try to conceal.
every hurt,saddness,and anger we feel.
broken hearts,and lives with his love he
can heal.
he is watching us all whether asleep,or
awake,every thought,every move,every step
we take.
under the master's watchful eye he has a
plan for us each,and every one.
he lives with us all of our days until we
are done.
in the end our souls he will all take,and
as we pass though eternities gate we will
truely be in Gods eyes.

© Copyright 1999 r. baker33 - All Rights Reserved
r. baker33
Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 55
glen easton wv
1 posted 1999-07-25 12:24 PM


believe it or not. i was laying awake,and
could'nt sleep,and the words just started
comming. just had to write this one down.

r. baker33
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since 1999-07-03
Posts 55
glen easton wv
2 posted 1999-07-27 02:37 PM


thought i would bring it back up and see
what yall think.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
3 posted 1999-07-27 10:35 PM


This is very good! And very truthful. I just can't put words here it is most excellent! If you like spiritual poems I have posted quite a few, I would appreciate any comments you had on them!
poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
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Arkansas
4 posted 1999-07-27 11:37 PM


Very nice imagery...very refreshing...as always, your work is true and genuine...

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet


r. baker33
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Posts 55
glen easton wv
5 posted 1999-07-28 08:49 PM


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