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Conscience

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auntsh
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0 posted 07-24-99 09:45 PM       View Profile for auntsh   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for auntsh

SH !!! Someone's listening, they'll hear every word.
I sense them ever closer, flying past like a bird.

Maybe we shouldn't say that, for they might even hear
The whispers of our hearts and thoughts might be too clear.

SH !!! Someone's watching, I fear that they will see
I feel them ever closer, darting like a bumble bee.

Maybe we shouldn't do this and maybe we should beware,
For I know that they are watching, I know that they are there.

You ask who I fear, that I should take such pause?
For everything I do, I simply say "Because,"
"Someone's always watching and listening, you see.
It's not someone I can name, it IS my inner ME.
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Alwye
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1 posted 07-24-99 09:49 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

I also have an 'inner me' that scolds me quite often and is always watching. Wonderful job!!

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*Krista Knutson*

"It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter
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2 posted 07-24-99 09:51 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

well done...an enjoyable read

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Ohme
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3 posted 07-24-99 10:20 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme



A beautiful Poem. The last two lines hooked me!
auntsh
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4 posted 07-25-99 07:34 AM       View Profile for auntsh   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for auntsh

Thank you for your kind remarks.
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