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walking the streets

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Chris h 007
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0 posted 07-24-99 07:37 PM       View Profile for Chris h 007   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chris h 007

She walks the street`s in need to eat.
In need to feed her son who is only one. They call her a whore, others adore.
For her mother did this when she was four.

This is the life it is a great fright.
To be walking late at night.
She gets beat, she lies, and she cheats.
They call her a whore, others adore.
For her mother started when she was four.

Pimps smack her around and call her a bitch, for now you see she has an itch .
A itch to leave this life another night.
Before another great fright.
She walks the streets in need to eat.
In need to feed her son who is only one.

She dont know what to do for now her son is two. She now has AIDS she is going to die today.She lays in the bed fully dead.
They call her a whore others adore.
For her mother started when she was four.


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Chris h 007
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1 posted 07-24-99 07:40 PM       View Profile for Chris h 007   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chris h 007

Really great poem hunny! I would like to see more. Keep them coming.

Luv,
Crystal
elvira
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2 posted 07-24-99 07:42 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

*sigh*...thanks for the goosebumps, and... Welcome to the forum Chris

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Poet deVine
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3 posted 07-24-99 08:37 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family!

Delores Hall
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since 07-16-99
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4 posted 07-24-99 09:55 PM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

Chris this is very good. I always thought you
could write if you applied yourself to it.You
do need to put your words in the right lines.
But for your first time this is good.I hope that you will write more.Happy writing.
Crystal
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5 posted 07-25-99 02:00 AM       View Profile for Crystal   Email Crystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crystal

I think this is a good poem. Beginner or not. I am replying to bring this to the top. I think that more people should read this. Keep up the good work hunny i would love to see more!

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Chris h 007
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6 posted 07-28-99 10:17 PM       View Profile for Chris h 007   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chris h 007

thank you
Crystal
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7 posted 07-31-99 08:02 PM       View Profile for Crystal   Email Crystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crystal

Back to the top!
Sally S.
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8 posted 07-31-99 08:19 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

pretty powerful subject..to be sure. Welcome to the family.
 
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