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The Voices.

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Crystal
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0 posted 07-24-99 06:46 PM       View Profile for Crystal   Email Crystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crystal

He's a boozer, loser, and a user,
He cheats, steals, and he's a drug abuser.

The betrayel and deceit,
Make me want to rip off his feet.

When he poops and pee's,
I want to shoot at his knees.

As he drinks every sip,
I want to break his hip.

With every taste,
I want to tear open his waist.

If he gave me stones,
I would break all his bones.

When he hangs out with all his peers,
I want to rip off his ears.

While he's with all his hoes,
I want to break his nose.

While he tells me all his lies,
I want to poke out his eyes.

With all his stares,
I want to rip out every hair.

With all his grief,
I want to pull out his teeth.

As he's being a prick,
I want to chop off his d**k.

The voices in my head,
tell me he's better off dead.

[This message has been edited by Crystal (edited 07-24-99).]

[This message has been edited by Crystal (edited 07-31-99).]
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Crystal
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1 posted 07-24-99 06:55 PM       View Profile for Crystal   Email Crystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crystal

**Notice***

This was just a joke for my boyfriend. I am really not this psycho!
heides
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2 posted 07-24-99 07:36 PM       View Profile for heides   Email heides   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for heides

Doing it would be psycho...thinking it is human. We cannot be held responsible for our thoughts, or we'd all be in jail, wouldn't we?
Chris h 007
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3 posted 07-24-99 08:03 PM       View Profile for Chris h 007   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chris h 007

Honey, this is a good poem i like it
i love you very much and you know this mannnnnn.. lol.. i will reply more later. love chris
Crystal
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4 posted 07-24-99 08:29 PM       View Profile for Crystal   Email Crystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crystal

Thank you Heides I feel better now. And also thank you Chris(hunny) for the reply.
Delores Hall
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since 07-16-99
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5 posted 07-24-99 10:01 PM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

Crystal you are one sick puppy.But you know
what I actually laughed.And that's what writing is all about. If you can pull an emotion out someone then you've done good.Or if you can make someone think that's good. Keep writing.
Crystal
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6 posted 07-25-99 01:50 AM       View Profile for Crystal   Email Crystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crystal

Thank-you Delores for finding this humorous, that was the point. This was not meant to harm or offend anyone. I'm glad you got a good laugh.
 
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