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The Pits Of Hell

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Delores Hall
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0 posted 07-24-99 05:40 PM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Delores Hall

The mammoth doors are huge.
The man is not sure what to do.
Should he open the door and peek inside?
Or should he run and hide?

It all seems like this is an evil dream.
Because behind those doors is evil things.

He always lived his life in a rush.
Never concerned with other people that much.
And he had done some terrible things.
That only God in his life could have changed.

But it's a little to late for that now.
Because you see he died today.
If only he had changed his evil ways.

The voice is tempting him."Open it up."
"Please he says I'm not that well."
"Well well you do tell."
"There is no other way out."
"And that's thru this door.

"Please he say's I can't take this no more."
He touches the handle and opens the door.
The voice beckons him to look.

"Because all your life you only took."
"So look at it my friend,look at it well."
"Because you are looking into the,
Pits Of Hell!
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Lost Dreamer
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1 posted 07-24-99 05:48 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Wow, This is a poem with a lot of insight. Great job. I really like it.
elvira
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2 posted 07-24-99 06:55 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

thanks for the shivers...just hoping i'll never have to open that door
Crystal
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3 posted 07-24-99 08:26 PM       View Profile for Crystal   Email Crystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crystal

This really makes me think about what is going to happen after we are gone. I hope I have lived my life right. Another great poem!
Delores Hall
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4 posted 07-24-99 11:47 PM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

What if there was no hell?And only a heaven?
That is what I would like think.But we are told otherwise.Thank you for the replies.
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5 posted 07-25-99 01:07 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

If there were heaven and no hell,
I wouldn't like that very well.
I want a place with devilish frights
For those who ran those yellow lights!
Delores Hall
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6 posted 07-25-99 10:22 AM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

Ballader you crack me up.What a sense of humor.
 
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