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Passions Dream

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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 07-24-99 01:26 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Passions Dream

Tender lips
of cherry wine
gently pressed
against mine.
Creating
my key-locked
vowed to another heart
a piercing of love's dart.
Sending
my fragile emotions
into a human quake,
as I approach
the vivid moment
where I suddenly
become awake.
The passions dream
smoldering in my mind
relentlessly
reminding me,
a dreamers love
is simply
difficult to find.
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1 posted 07-24-99 03:57 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Difficult to find, maybe, but it's there, as I'm sure you know. Nice work, dreamer.
heides
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2 posted 07-24-99 06:21 PM       View Profile for heides   Email heides   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for heides

maybe that's why I can't ever remember my dreams...
Your poem. It's sad, but true, but that combination pleases me, you know. Not that sadness pleases me, what I mean is reading it does. I'll be looking for more like this one.
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3 posted 07-24-99 08:31 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I loved this one. Beautiful.
Crystal
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4 posted 07-24-99 08:40 PM       View Profile for Crystal   Email Crystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crystal

I enjoy reading your poems. This one is truly beautiful.
Ohme
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This makes me feel a bit melancholy. Perhaps that is why I like it.
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6 posted 07-24-99 09:11 PM       View Profile for Moon Dust   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Moon Dust

Reminds me of a past relationship. Nice work.

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Lost Dreamer
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7 posted 07-24-99 11:53 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

I am speechless, never have I had so many responses to a poem. It sends the emotions soaring to great heights. I thank each and everyone of you for first of all reading what I write, and second for taking the time to give your comments.This is a wonderful home away from home. Thanks again all of you!
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