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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
Tell me what you see when you look at me Did I fill your hopes of what I should be Have I ever made you happy just once in your life Or have I been a burden, a source of pain and strife Why don't you tell me your hopes, thoughts, and dreams How do I reach you, can't you hear my screams ------------------ Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching... |
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quote99 Junior Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 17US |
Very good! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Sometimes love is deaf, dumb, and blind. Nice job. |
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auntsh Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 11Saginaw, Tx, USA |
Very good. Back to the top |
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