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HM3
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0 posted 07-24-99 10:31 AM       View Profile for HM3   Email HM3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for HM3

Tell me what you see when you look at me
Did I fill your hopes of what I should be
Have I ever made you happy just once in your life
Or have I been a burden, a source of pain and strife
Why don't you tell me your hopes, thoughts, and dreams
How do I reach you, can't you hear my screams

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Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching...
© Copyright 1999 Wanda Ozee - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 07-24-99 11:51 AM       View Profile for quote99   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for quote99

Very good!
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2 posted 07-24-99 01:36 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Sometimes love is deaf, dumb, and blind. Nice job.
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Very good. Back to the top
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