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Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA 
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Shhhhh..... Listen..... Hear that? The critters are talking It's been so long since I stopped to listen. Since there were no bulldozers, Chainsaws or tractors in my ears. There's no need to drown out The mechanical melee with music. Shhhhh..... Listen..... Hear that? You can almost hear the stars twinkle. The blend of evening leaves rustling And the critter's chatter A symphony. Shhhhh..... Listen..... Hear that? A critter scuttling through the brush And over there, a stream. It's like I've been deaf, And now suddenly can hear; And there's so much to listen for. Shhhhh..... Listen..... Hear that? Sharon Lee Rotondi (Enotneicna) This is the first piece I wrote after my recent move from property that was being clear cut to plant vineyard. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I would like to see you build on this... moving away from the hustle and bustle can be quite innovating. ------------------ © KRJ 22 Jul 99 Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This was beautiful, I bet your a lot more tranquil now also. I could fall asleep listening to nature. |
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