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Am I |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Am I I cannot see the reason am I oh so blind? Does it really dull the pain, or just screen it for a while? Do you think your invincible just cause you feel no pain? You say your having fun tomorrow you won't remember. Am I cynical to wish not to see you numb? Do you know I'm here? Do you care I'm here? You say it relaxes you, but all I see is stress. Am I wrong to feel for you that what your doing is bad? I do somersaults in my mind trying to reach you. I won't give up you mean to much for me to let you be succumbed by this thing that alters your senses. |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
this poem has a lot of heart in it IMHO... it definitely touched my heart.. ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
I know someone who is very dear that does the same thing.Unfortunately you can't help someone who won't help themselves.But it never hurts to keep trying.Happy writing. |
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