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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 07-23-99 09:04 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Am I

I cannot see the reason
am I oh so blind?
Does it really dull the pain,
or just screen it for a while?
Do you think your invincible
just cause you feel no pain?
You say your having fun
tomorrow you won't remember.

Am I cynical to wish
not to see you numb?
Do you know I'm here?
Do you care I'm here?
You say it relaxes you,
but all I see is stress.

Am I wrong to feel for you
that what your doing is bad?
I do somersaults in my mind
trying to reach you.
I won't give up
you mean to much
for me to let you
be succumbed by this thing
that alters your senses.
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Gentle Soul
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1 posted 07-26-99 08:26 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

this poem has a lot of heart in it IMHO... it definitely touched my heart..

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Delores Hall
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2 posted 07-26-99 11:50 PM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

I know someone who is very dear that does
the same thing.Unfortunately you can't help
someone who won't help themselves.But it never hurts to keep trying.Happy writing.
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