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This Love

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orpheus
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This love
Of light and shadows
Of dying colours
And naked words
Bleed
Feel
Hurt
Running through your mouth
And breaking on my lips

And I don't know how to tell you
That you are all that matters
And I am all that's left

That every single word
Inside of me
Is seeking you
So desperately
Beyond reach
And all my sorrows
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Emmy
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WOW...your poem conveyed such amazing desparation. Excellent.
Lost Dreamer
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2 posted 07-23-99 11:50 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

It's amazing how one person can make us feel
emotions that are so strong. Great writing here.
orpheus
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3 posted 07-24-99 08:06 PM       View Profile for orpheus   Email orpheus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for orpheus

I guess anyone who post his/her poems is hoping to be understood. I guess I was. I thank you so for you gentle words.

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sometimes
we can only breathe
if we bleed a little
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