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How thine eyes art to me

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Sundance
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0 posted 07-23-99 01:05 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sundance

(thanks to Artur, your suggestions r always welcome! )

Thou look at me from different eyes,
than when I saw thee last.
Because when last I saw thee,
We had a blast!

Your eyes have changed fron gaiety,
many other things different,
They are cloudy and changed,
although they are still reverent.

Where did those happy eyes go?
They were a sight to see,
Parties were attended,
Why did thee do that to me?

Although those eyes are now gone,
I still love thee,
for as thou art,
you mean the world to me.
© Copyright 1999 Sundance - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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Great, I like it!

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*Krista Knutson*

"It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter
 
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