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Open Poetry #1

How thine eyes art to me

Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

0 posted 1999-07-23 01:05 PM

(thanks to Artur, your suggestions r always welcome! )

Thou look at me from different eyes,
than when I saw thee last.
Because when last I saw thee,
We had a blast!

Your eyes have changed fron gaiety,
many other things different,
They are cloudy and changed,
although they are still reverent.

Where did those happy eyes go?
They were a sight to see,
Parties were attended,
Why did thee do that to me?

Although those eyes are now gone,
I still love thee,
for as thou art,
you mean the world to me.

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-07-23 05:14 PM

Great, I like it!

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*Krista Knutson*

"It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter

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