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IsabelleSkye
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since 1999-06-27
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0 posted 1999-07-23 01:20 AM


in fields of lavendar blue
hold me close to you
call my name upon the wind
tempt my heart with this sin

sky of deepest azure
(of your love I am so sure)
wisp of white floating there
a remembrance of your crystal stare
the crescent moon hung so high
in a somewhat mimic of your smile
the stars twinkle from above
in a black veiled echo of our love
the moon, the stars speak to me
reminding me of those faint memories
I can e'er forget your gentle voice
though I know that leaving was my choice
and if through time and time alone
I come to terms with all I've done
you know I'll always love you true
if I could but find the way home to you

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"I would rather sit on a pumpkin, and have it all to myself,
than to be crowded on a velvet cushion."
.....Henry David Thoreau

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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-07-23 01:23 AM


Stunning, dear! I FEEL the loss and hope in it, very well.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©



Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
2 posted 1999-07-23 01:29 AM


Extremely beautiful, well done!

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*Krista Knutson*

"It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter

Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 1999-07-23 01:36 AM


sigh! What is there to say about such a lovely poem written with such depth of feeling? This is one of your best.

IsabelleSkye
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since 1999-06-27
Posts 253

4 posted 1999-07-23 01:40 AM


thanks all of you, I was inspired....and my heart fairly burst to write this poem! LOL
It's just one of those things....
*big smile*
Izzzzzzzzy

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"I would rather sit on a pumpkin, and have it all to myself,
than to be crowded on a velvet cushion."
.....Henry David Thoreau


[This message has been edited by IsabelleSkye (edited 07-23-99).]

Colin
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England
5 posted 1999-07-23 09:30 AM


A beautiful poem darling, as usual *8)

Just remember, TWO of us are looking for the way.
Always yours,
Eric.

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