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IsabelleSkye
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0 posted 07-23-99 01:20 AM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for IsabelleSkye

in fields of lavendar blue
hold me close to you
call my name upon the wind
tempt my heart with this sin

sky of deepest azure
(of your love I am so sure)
wisp of white floating there
a remembrance of your crystal stare
the crescent moon hung so high
in a somewhat mimic of your smile
the stars twinkle from above
in a black veiled echo of our love
the moon, the stars speak to me
reminding me of those faint memories
I can e'er forget your gentle voice
though I know that leaving was my choice
and if through time and time alone
I come to terms with all I've done
you know I'll always love you true
if I could but find the way home to you

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"I would rather sit on a pumpkin, and have it all to myself,
than to be crowded on a velvet cushion."
.....Henry David Thoreau
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DreamEvil
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1 posted 07-23-99 01:23 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Stunning, dear! I FEEL the loss and hope in it, very well.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvilŠ


Alwye
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2 posted 07-23-99 01:29 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Extremely beautiful, well done!

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*Krista Knutson*

"It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter
Poet deVine
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3 posted 07-23-99 01:36 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

sigh! What is there to say about such a lovely poem written with such depth of feeling? This is one of your best.
IsabelleSkye
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4 posted 07-23-99 01:40 AM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for IsabelleSkye

thanks all of you, I was inspired....and my heart fairly burst to write this poem! LOL
It's just one of those things....
*big smile*
Izzzzzzzzy

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"I would rather sit on a pumpkin, and have it all to myself,
than to be crowded on a velvet cushion."
.....Henry David Thoreau


[This message has been edited by IsabelleSkye (edited 07-23-99).]
Colin
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5 posted 07-23-99 09:30 AM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Colin

A beautiful poem darling, as usual *8)

Just remember, TWO of us are looking for the way.
Always yours,
Eric.
 
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