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The only one to blame

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heaven_0401
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since 07-12-99
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0 posted 07-22-99 11:45 PM       View Profile for heaven_0401   Email heaven_0401   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for heaven_0401

The brillant darkness
occupies the holes
As the colourful lively ocean
explodes

You cry and violently through you head in shame
And muffle
"I'm the only one to blame"

The sky thunders with terrifying pain
and you reliase
"YOu feel just the same"

The roses that lie
beneath your heart
Were once innocent and beautiful
Each petal portraying it's on part

YOu were once like that
Til the heart ached too much
Til the once passionate petals
Turned into nothing but
Useless dust
Never again to smell the sweet taste of lust

The waves keep on breaking
Succumbing to the golden shore
As you continue to fall
Until theres nothing
Nothing
There at all

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please post what you think
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Delores Hall
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since 07-16-99
Posts 358
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1 posted 07-23-99 12:26 AM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

This is nice.Keep writing.
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