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Passion of the Immortal

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Elysium Moon
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0 posted 07-22-99 11:31 PM       View Profile for Elysium Moon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elysium Moon

Paradise found
in her hair unbound
as it floats down to her waist

Passion discovered
in her body uncovered
of love she now shall taste

Pleasures enter
through her wantonís center
abandoned there in haste

Sleep discover
beneath sated cover
immortal no longer chaste


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Poet deVine
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1 posted 07-23-99 07:52 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Good, but tread lightly, this may be more suited to the Adult Forum.
Andrew Scott
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2 posted 07-23-99 08:23 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

I've read all three of the Immortal postings and found them very appealing. I'm looking forward to more. Welcome to this land of ours.
Craig
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3 posted 07-24-99 02:17 PM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig

This is really well done, I can only assume that people have missed this, or not had enough time or chance to reply to it, donít get depressed if people donít answer straight away, your good they just donít know yet how good, so lets give them another chance.
INclan
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4 posted 07-24-99 04:46 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Indeed a delight, however as stated before you might find the adult forum more suited to this level of poetic passion.
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5 posted 05-23-2002 02:30 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Rockin'!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

 
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