How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #1 Archive
 Fair Lady
 1 2 3 4
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Fair Lady (letter 2 to Kind Sir)

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
Saxoness
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 07-18-99
Posts 1176
Texas


0 posted 07-22-99 10:32 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Saxoness


FAIR LADY


Oh, why do you doubt me so, Fair Lady, when I'd wait a thousand years to hear you sigh, and die a thousand deaths if one tear you did waste on such an unworthy person as I.
When your tender eyes fell upon me through the garden, I felt my heart die, then resurrect itself to get one last look.
But, I fear you are right, Fair Lady, when you lament that love cannot live but in a perfect world.
But surely…when two hearts are as bound together as ours…love will hold us above this imperfect world, until love, itself, no longer exists.

~ Angela Erin Burke ~


------------------
"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


© Copyright 1999 Angela Erin Burke - All Rights Reserved
Saxoness
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 07-18-99
Posts 1176
Texas


1 posted 07-23-99 09:32 AM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

read me please

------------------
"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


Delores Hall
Member
since 07-16-99
Posts 358
USA


2 posted 07-23-99 11:59 AM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

Nice work.What if love didn't exist? What a
sad world this would be.
doreen peri
Member Rara Avis
since 05-25-99
Posts 8028
Virginia


3 posted 07-23-99 12:29 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

This is absolutely beautiful. It flows from the tongue and pours out from the heart. The ONLY change I'd make is to add a question mark at the end of the first sentence.

EXCELLENT! Keep up the good work.
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 05-26-99
Posts 25869
Hurricane Alley


4 posted 08-13-99 01:58 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

An oldie but goodie from one of my favorites...this is a wonderfully written poem.
 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #1 >> Fair Lady Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors