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Saxoness
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0 posted 1999-07-22 10:30 PM


Tanka

A tall shivering tree
Wraps its bare branches
Around it's hunched trunk
Looking up through the blustering sky
And silently waiting for spring

~ Angela Erin Burke ~


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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot



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DreamEvil
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1 posted 1999-07-22 11:17 PM


Eloquent.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©



Saxoness
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2 posted 1999-07-23 09:26 AM


thanks

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot



doreen peri
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3 posted 1999-07-23 12:33 PM


Lovely stanza. I don't get the title, but loved the verse. Good work.

dp

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