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Elysium Moon
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since 1999-07-22
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0 posted 1999-07-22 10:09 PM



Silvery wings spreading wide
she took her lover deep inside
held him in her womanly vise
till he surrendered to her ice
Nymph of lambent ice so pure
took a victim as her cure
no mortal will she allow to be
succor of her immortality
cast aside he lay replete
spells were given, now complete
doomed to roam for eternity
remembering her femininity



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elvira
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since 1999-07-06
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1 posted 1999-07-22 10:13 PM


romantic and dark...great combination...and... Welcome Elysium Moon

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If I had my mouth I would bite.
If I had my liberty I would do my liking.
In the mean time, let me be that I am, and seek not to alter me. ~~~Shakespeare~~~


Saxoness
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since 1999-07-18
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Texas
2 posted 1999-07-22 10:39 PM


wow, ver very good.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot



Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 1999-07-23 07:55 PM


Welcome to the forum. This is dark and mildly erotic, I liked it.
bsquirrel
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since 2000-01-03
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4 posted 2002-05-23 02:29 PM


Hey, look what I found.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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