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Revenge of the Immortal

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Elysium Moon
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0 posted 07-22-99 10:09 PM       View Profile for Elysium Moon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elysium Moon


Silvery wings spreading wide
she took her lover deep inside
held him in her womanly vise
till he surrendered to her ice
Nymph of lambent ice so pure
took a victim as her cure
no mortal will she allow to be
succor of her immortality
cast aside he lay replete
spells were given, now complete
doomed to roam for eternity
remembering her femininity


© Copyright 1999 Elysium Moon - All Rights Reserved
elvira
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1 posted 07-22-99 10:13 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

romantic and dark...great combination...and... Welcome Elysium Moon

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If I had my mouth I would bite.
If I had my liberty I would do my liking.
In the mean time, let me be that I am, and seek not to alter me. ~~~Shakespeare~~~

Saxoness
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2 posted 07-22-99 10:39 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

wow, ver very good.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


Poet deVine
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3 posted 07-23-99 07:55 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the forum. This is dark and mildly erotic, I liked it.
bsquirrel
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4 posted 05-23-2002 02:29 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Hey, look what I found.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

 
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