How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #1 Archive
 lifes status
 1 2 3 4
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

lifes status

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
r. baker33
Member
since 07-03-99
Posts 55
glen easton wv


0 posted 07-22-99 09:09 PM       View Profile for r. baker33   Email r. baker33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit r. baker33's Home Page   View IP for r. baker33

I try so hard that it hurts.
I never seem to get anywhere,and then I
stop, and wonder why?all the tears I cry,
and still nowhere.
each day running into the next.
I feel like I am running lifes race to
nowhere. is there really a reason,or is it
just truth or dare?
there is a heavy dark feeling in my soul,
a void nothing to fill the hole.
still no answers why?
things that people take for granted
everyday to me are small treasures.
keep them near,and dear because someday
they will be gone,and so will I.
In the after the the next generation will
be here asking the same questions,and
giving the same thoughts. all with the same
conclusion. In every human soul there is
only but one certainty. that is eternity!
that is the only true meaning of the word
forever.
© Copyright 1999 r. baker33 - All Rights Reserved
poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite
since 07-25-99
Posts 2961
Arkansas


1 posted 07-25-99 09:53 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Isn't it strange how all of us are so different, yet at some time or another, in our lives, we all feel the pain you described here? My mind has hurt like this before so many times! I feel your desperation....

------------------
- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

r. baker33
Member
since 07-03-99
Posts 55
glen easton wv


2 posted 07-28-99 08:58 PM       View Profile for r. baker33   Email r. baker33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit r. baker33's Home Page   View IP for r. baker33

to the top.
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 07-22-99
Posts 9561
Illinois


3 posted 07-28-99 09:12 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Nice job, we all need to appreciate the small things in life. Left a note for ya in the poem you just commented on!
God be with you.
poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite
since 07-25-99
Posts 2961
Arkansas


4 posted 07-28-99 11:40 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Gawd Richard, I'm so sorry I screwed your name up - how embarressing ! You'll have to understand how giddy I was when I was typing that -- I've just posted my first in the "naughty" forum and it's been a hit with the guys ! LOL
I do know who you are - please forgive me...

------------------
- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #1 >> lifes status Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors