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Love Again |
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SWEET ROSE New Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 1FORT WORTH TX. USA |
BECAUSE IM SO CONFUESED THE ONLY WAY I CAN EXPLAIN IT IS THAT YOU LOOK AT THIS AS YOUR FIRST LOVE HOW HAPPY IT SHOULD MAKE YOU AND THAT YOU'LL ALWAYS REMEBER IT BUT TO ME IT IS ANOTHER HEART BREAK SOMEONE ILL NEVER SEE AGAIN OR FROM THEM NEVER HEAR THE WORDS I LOVE YOU AGAIN I'LL CRY AGAIN AND I'LL MOVE ON AGAIN YOU'LL FEEL ONLY MEMORIES FADE THE WORDS I LOVE YOU WILL CREEP ON TO YOUR LIPS AGAIN BUT IT WONT BE ME YOUR SAYING IT TO ILL HEAR YOUR VOICE ONLY IN MY MIND AND SEE YOUR SMILE ONLY IN MY DREAMS YOU'LL FIND NEW HAPPINESS AND AGAIN I'LL BE ALONE ------------------ ROSE |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the forum. While I understand the feelings you convey in your poem, you might try to type in lower case and put some structure in the poem for ease of reading. Keep up the good work...I look forward to your next piece.  |
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