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The Man in the Moon |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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The Man in the Moon The man in the moon looked at me and laughed about my blindness. He thought everyone knew about the stars that shine in the night. He spoke about the distinction of each and every one. Each one is very special for they reach out to all mankind. You may have one... You may have more... depending on your need. I was told I have four shining down on me. They love us from above and issue angels here to guide. Now when I gaze up to the starry sky, my favorite stars of all will be... The one's brightly shinning down on me. (Thanks, Grandma, Mom, Helen, & Archie) My life is richer with your guiding lights. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
An interesting view of the night sky. If my daughters ever ask "What are stars?" I'll have something nice to tell them. My youngest just loves Mr. Moon. |
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Sundance Member
since 1999-07-11
Posts 123 |
Very nice! U hav an interesting view of the night sky!  |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Thank-you Andrew Scott, & Sundance Your comments are well appreciated. |
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Genea Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 321USA |
Twinkle twinkle little star......hehe...actually, this one 'bout choked me up....very nice. ~G |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Thank-You, Genea Your thoughts are much appreciated. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beautiful...a lovely way to look at the night sky. Thanks for sharing. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
The stars are spirits of our ancestors shining down on us, according to some Indian legends. Who are we to say they are wrong? Nicely done, dreamer. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
I would like to believe that such meracles really do exist!! A very nice poem. [This message has been edited by Ohme (edited 07-24-99).] |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Thank-you Alwye, Balladeer, & Ohme, All your comments are much appreciated for it makes me feel I accomplished writing a poem worthy of feeling good about. |
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