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elvira
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1 posted 07-22-99 05:52 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Elvira,

Thank you, I liked the form and I like the content. Pleae, keep it up.
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This is well-done, Elvira, and very shapely.
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Andrew Scott
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In reference to the last line... once again, and I quote from a source I know not... "Love enters through a woman'e ears." As for the shape? I could see that, but I refuse to make comment on the numbers Good piece of work here.

P.S. Thanks for taking the time to visit my own work. Very much appreciated.
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Andrew Scott
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Ah, yes. "I see, I see." said the blind man. I keep telling myself I've got to get my eyes checked.
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Very nice, it must be a challenge to get the shapes for your poetry. It definetly gives style and class to the poems.
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Perfection must be... (taking your other poems into account) a forbidding and demanding Master dressed in black whose every oh-so-English word must be obeyed, he with the countenance of Alan Rickman, perhaps? and a frequent flyer? *smiles*
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You named your poem Perfection,
Dare never dream of rejection.
With prose so sweet, so fine,
I know they'll last for all of time!

(by the by, I may be the sick one, but 'tis not the fair form of a woman I see in the shape of your words Elvira!!!)

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Where did I go wrong, I never needed this before,
I need a woman, to help me feel.
-Live-
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