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Starfish
Junior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 34
New Zealand

0 posted 1999-07-22 07:35 AM


MEMO

In my personal space,
night drifts into day
day into night

I lean on my pillow
move, forget till morning

your head tilting
eyes lilting
since the last time
we spoke

NOTE

I whisper your name
and lay the wreath to ground.

EMAIL

loverose@botanical.nz

© Copyright 1999 Starfish - All Rights Reserved
Saxoness
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Senior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102
Texas
1 posted 1999-07-22 08:58 AM


very nice! i like it much

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


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