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Starfish
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since 07-20-99
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New Zealand


0 posted 07-22-99 03:09 AM       View Profile for Starfish   Email Starfish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starfish

My child
reachs me,
clinging
to my
wet skin,

free
he swims
to the
other side,

Proudly
bobbing,
like any
buoy should.

For my sister and my nephew.
© Copyright 1999 Starfish - All Rights Reserved
thursdayschild
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since 07-01-99
Posts 174
Houston, Tx.


1 posted 07-22-99 03:30 AM       View Profile for thursdayschild   Email thursdayschild   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for thursdayschild

love the image you created here, so sweet!
the last stanza was especially excellent,
great use of words....thanks for sharing
this!
 
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