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Starfish
Junior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 34
New Zealand
0 posted 1999-07-22 03:09 AM

My child
reachs me,
clinging
to my
wet skin,

free
he swims
to the
other side,

Proudly
bobbing,
like any
buoy should.

For my sister and my nephew.
© Copyright 1999 Starfish - All Rights Reserved
thursdayschild
Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169
Houston, Tx.
1 posted 1999-07-22 03:30 AM

love the image you created here, so sweet!
the last stanza was especially excellent,
great use of words....thanks for sharing
this!
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