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Confusing Love

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Princess Lily
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since 07-13-99
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0 posted 07-22-99 12:54 AM       View Profile for Princess Lily   Email Princess Lily   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Princess Lily

for advice-here i should not come
but help me please-for i need some
so in a poem this will be put
please reply i need your input
i'm scared of life night and day
of what will go and what will stay
dearly i do love my friends and family
the question is-do they love me?
the one true love that i have found
has took my heart and thrown it down
to be crushed a thousand times
every day i wonder why
he loves my friend
she loves his
i love him
so tell me-what gives?
he likes me
but says it would be unfair-see?
if he went with me
when he loves she
i agree but must admit
that i know where it went
the bottom of the bottomless pit
see-i think my heart hit
i cry
wonder why
yet still i wake up every day
hoping that day is the day
he will give up on her and love me so
'til then i will pray and i'll love him dear
'til the day he whispers in my ear
"i love you"
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help-please??

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe




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thursdayschild
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1 posted 07-22-99 02:42 AM       View Profile for thursdayschild   Email thursdayschild   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for thursdayschild

Oh, dear girl, you are worth more than this,
his arrogance, cheating, non-intelligence...
Pick-up your heart, and go on from here,
another awaits who shall hold you dear.
Keep the hope alive!
Princess Lily
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2 posted 07-22-99 02:27 PM       View Profile for Princess Lily   Email Princess Lily   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Princess Lily

Thank you for replying.Ireally need all the advice I can get.I love him.

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe


blueloon
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3 posted 07-22-99 03:20 PM       View Profile for blueloon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for blueloon

I must agree with Thursdaychild,
you deserve more than his guile.
blueloon
Princess Lily
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4 posted 07-22-99 04:55 PM       View Profile for Princess Lily   Email Princess Lily   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Princess Lily

Thanks blueloon.I really love him, but I know that i have to let go.I'm still glad we're friends.

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


5 posted 07-22-99 05:58 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Drop drop drop him. Yesterday. As you know from this site, there are far better ones out there.

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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

Balladeer
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6 posted 07-22-99 06:23 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

You say your heart fell in a pit?
Throw him down there next to it!!
Princess Lily
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7 posted 07-22-99 10:55 PM       View Profile for Princess Lily   Email Princess Lily   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Princess Lily

Balladeer,
you seem to be a very intelligent person and I very much appreciate the reply.I will throw him down there, but I leave him with this note.You fell into a pit...in which there is no escape...but,
my dear, as for my heart...has left through a secret passage...only the ones who love and lose...find this hidden doorway..as for you...you pretend to love then leave...darling..there is no way out...

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe


Princess Lily
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8 posted 07-22-99 11:00 PM       View Profile for Princess Lily   Email Princess Lily   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Princess Lily

Sunshine-thank you for the reply.I now realize that it is better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all.I will always love him of course because love has no limitations, but as dear Balladeer said he should be in that pit.I believe he is truly sorry for hurt me, but in the pit he will go because now from him my heart has a wound that cannot be repaired with him on my mind-again thank you!

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe




[This message has been edited by Princess Lily (edited 07-22-99).]
Alwye
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In the space between moments


9 posted 08-09-99 01:18 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Sometimes its hard to let them go, my friend. Excellent poem, they help with the pain. I hope to hear from you soon, Meli!!

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy
Princess Lily
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10 posted 08-09-99 01:54 AM       View Profile for Princess Lily   Email Princess Lily   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Princess Lily

Thank you my sweet friend.It is hard to let go, but I will Yours always~Meli

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe

*A rose is a rose it withers and dies...so long as you keep it the memories survive*




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