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Open Poetry #1

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swan
Member

since 1999-07-19

Posts 58
california, usa

0 posted 1999-07-22 12:22 PM

I come here in the summer, wind and the rain. Twice a week I sit here and tell it everything. There's never any problem and i'm never feeling blue, until all that changes, the moment i think of you. There is a pain deep inside me everytime i look across the street, and wonder if i crossed it, would you see me? would we meet? I know your there right now, flirting with that girl,but all i can do is sit here and let it tear appart my world.

Princess Lily
Member

since 1999-07-13

Posts 149
USA

1 posted 1999-07-22 12:57 PM

Is this a past experience-if it is i am so very sorry.this is very well expressed feelings

swan
Member

since 1999-07-19

Posts 58
california, usa

2 posted 1999-07-22 02:45 AM

thanks for liking my poem, yes it's a past experience all of my poems are about my experiences.
Swan

swan
Member

since 1999-07-19

Posts 58
california, usa

3 posted 1999-07-22 02:45 AM

thanks for liking my poem, yes it's a past experience all of my poems are about my experiences.
Swan

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