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Broken Heart

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tacojen
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0 posted 07-21-99 10:07 PM       View Profile for tacojen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tacojen

I amble slowly along the beach.
I button my coat to shield my aching heart from the cold wind.
I look over the choppy waves, I wonder if I can walk on the shimmering path that the moon makes on the water.
I sit down on a lonely rock.
I draw broken heart's in the cold sand.
I brush my tears away...
I wonder why love has to hurt so much....

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Princess Lily
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1 posted 07-22-99 01:24 AM       View Profile for Princess Lily   Email Princess Lily   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Princess Lily

Love is very peculiar-this is well written

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swan
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2 posted 07-22-99 03:32 PM       View Profile for swan   Email swan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for swan

this is very nice
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