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tacojen
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since 1999-07-21
Posts 23


0 posted 1999-07-21 10:07 PM


I amble slowly along the beach.
I button my coat to shield my aching heart from the cold wind.
I look over the choppy waves, I wonder if I can walk on the shimmering path that the moon makes on the water.
I sit down on a lonely rock.
I draw broken heart's in the cold sand.
I brush my tears away...
I wonder why love has to hurt so much....

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Angel Hugs

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Princess Lily
Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149
USA
1 posted 1999-07-22 01:24 AM


Love is very peculiar-this is well written

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe




[This message has been edited by Princess Lily (edited 07-22-99).]

swan
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since 1999-07-19
Posts 58
california, usa
2 posted 1999-07-22 03:32 PM


this is very nice
Swan

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