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Devilish33
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0 posted 07-21-99 08:29 PM       View Profile for Devilish33   Email Devilish33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Devilish33

They take and take, till it's all gone, Another realationship that was all wrong.
Someday it'll be my turn,, to take and take, then I'll cause the first burn.
But everytime you lose a part, something so precious as your heart.
To be able to give back, would be so kind.
A Love that one day I will find.
To mine a love so pure, so kind, to have faith that's not all blind. To find a love , so great and so sweet,
Only then will I have my own retreat. Kim C.
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1 posted 07-21-99 08:37 PM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

Wonderful piece. Good writing.
Yoman3759
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I think it's a brilliant poem, so full of a kind of "normalcy" that lets you feel that these feelings are like my own...Good work Devilish...

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