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Leave the cruel night

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tacojen
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0 posted 07-21-99 05:49 PM       View Profile for tacojen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tacojen

The sun goes down tarnished in the dusk sinking low to a tune you made up for love..
But it's something crazy your hearing!
Not an empty voice from the hollows of your heart..
A loud resounding crash in the black and shiny night.
The moon glazes over the inky murk of the sea.
Seagulls leave you; in your surprise, stars laugh in your face, the moon weeps in your eyes.
-Leave the cruel night-
Plunge deep in the tidal waters
-A cold dash of sorrow-
Bittersweet breezes sweep the last of your dreams away with you.

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Poet deVine
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1 posted 08-13-99 02:21 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This one has some pretty good imagery!
Starith
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2 posted 08-18-99 08:07 PM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starith

A nicely writen peom...nice imagery...
LngJhnAg
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3 posted 08-18-99 09:02 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

snappin' my fingers, beatnik style, Baby. Yeah... cool, man. I dig this scene your playing in my mind. Dig it, Baby.

This was really beat... I loved it.
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