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Black and Crunchy

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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 07-21-99 05:32 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Black and Crunchy

I watch you sleeping
as your lovers body
entwined about you,
like my web
to a feast of my palate.
I've attempted to crawl
through those satin sheets
trying to grip on ...
Only sliding to the ground.

I'm perched above you now
like Tarzan in the jungle
ready to spin me toward you
with passion of exploration.
I release my silk...
Slowly lowering to your body.

My hairy black and crunchy body
has descended upon you now
exploring you inch by inch.
I've discovered a hollow cave
that a ferocious creature
must occupy...
With it's mighty roar
it's a wonder how you sleep.

Curiosity has it's chains on me
so exploring I will go,
one foot at a time...
Times eight and I'll be in.
It feels weird in here
kind of damp, yet arid.
The sound echo's off the walls
making me shake with fear.

What's happening?
The walls are closing in...
I'm floating away
through some narrow channel
Plop...
Into some gurgling fluid I fall.
I'm sinking to my demise
farewell, and sweet dreams
all my sleeping friends.

(I recently read that in our lifetime
we eat about 8 spiders in our sleep)
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Andrew Scott
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1 posted 07-21-99 05:42 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Very Tasty. Thanks for the treat. I'm still laughing

Rita
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2 posted 07-21-99 05:45 PM       View Profile for Rita   Email Rita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rita

misleading, but the visuals were there.......nicely done.....
elvira
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3 posted 07-21-99 06:41 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

very cleverly constructed...at first i thought it was a love poem...thanks for the different twist

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If I had my mouth I would bite. If I had my liberty I would do my liking. In the mean time, let me be that I am, and seek not to alter me. ~~~Shakespeare~~~

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4 posted 07-21-99 07:09 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I'm sleeping on my tummy tonight!
Ohme
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The body does need protine and I suspect there are less spiders in the world because someone asleep swallowed. Tonight I'll sleep with a mask over my face. Delightful!
Lost Dreamer
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6 posted 07-21-99 09:12 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

I would like to thank all of you for your responses. I have to say I had a blast writing this.
Thanks Andrew Scott, for inspiring me (little did you know that you would)How a simple comment can jump-start a stalled mind.
Rita and elvira, sorry to elude you. It just flowed well this way for me.
Sir Balladeer, I don't think you have to worry for I don't know how you have time to sleep, while creating all the masterpieces here, that enlighten us all.
Ohme, I would say that a mask is probably the only sure bet, yet maybe we've already had our quota, so no need to worry right?
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