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Love's Last Dance (from the darker side of AS)

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Andrew Scott
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since 06-24-99
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Redlands,CA,USA


0 posted 07-21-99 04:44 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Andrew Scott

Choose your weapon wisely
For I'll grant no second chance
In this moment of destruction
How will it be, your warrior stance?

Will you unsheathe your tongue
To slash with rapier wit
Or maim with piercing dark eyes
In murderous black silence sit

Perhaps you'll fly with flailing fists
Pummeling with all your might
Or slowly seek to strangle
With abandonment in the night

You could seek another
A champion for your cause
Inflicting the deepest wounds
From betrayals poisonous claws

However you may choose
This is your one final chance
My love's embattled heart lies torn
So please, let us end this bloody dance
© Copyright 1999 Andrew Scott - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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since 06-22-99
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1 posted 07-21-99 04:47 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

i like it alot shows your wit and promise as great poet and chills abound
Sunshine
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2 posted 07-21-99 04:48 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Very well done. Thank you.

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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

Balladeer
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3 posted 07-21-99 04:58 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

A great example of a pleaful dialogue from an embittered man toward his woman (wife?) WELL DONE!
Rita
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since 07-19-99
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4 posted 07-21-99 05:53 PM       View Profile for Rita   Email Rita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rita

thanks for the high opinion .means much coming from you.
Andrew Scott
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5 posted 07-21-99 06:38 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Thanks one and all for your responses.

Sir WOW: Your remarks are a boon. Although I've put words to paper off and on, I've only been serious about it these past six months.

Sunshine: I've enjoyed several of your's as well. Thanks for coming by.

Balladeer: Your every word is an inspiration. I thank you for taking the time and energy to respond to nearly all my postings. You are one of the best!

Rita: Thanks for coming by, credit where credit due.

P.S. I love my wife dearly, and she loves me. Our dance is a beauty to behold.
elvira
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since 07-06-99
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6 posted 07-21-99 06:48 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

the tongue can sometimes be the mightiest weapon of them all...enjoyed your poem

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If I had my mouth I would bite. If I had my liberty I would do my liking. In the mean time, let me be that I am, and seek not to alter me. ~~~Shakespeare~~~

Andrew Scott
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7 posted 07-21-99 07:55 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Thank you dear Elvira. You have done more than most to elevate this site. Your efforts are much appreciated.
Ohme
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8 posted 07-21-99 08:01 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Very good Andrew. I enjoyed it very much.
 
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