Love's Last Dance (from the darker side of AS)

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Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

0 posted 1999-07-21 04:44 PM

Choose your weapon wisely
For I'll grant no second chance
In this moment of destruction
How will it be, your warrior stance?

Will you unsheathe your tongue
To slash with rapier wit
Or maim with piercing dark eyes
In murderous black silence sit

Perhaps you'll fly with flailing fists
Pummeling with all your might
Or slowly seek to strangle
With abandonment in the night

You could seek another
A champion for your cause
Inflicting the deepest wounds
From betrayals poisonous claws

However you may choose
This is your one final chance
My love's embattled heart lies torn
So please, let us end this bloody dance

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 1999-07-21 04:47 PM

i like it alot shows your wit and promise as great poet and chills abound

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 1999-07-21 04:48 PM

Very well done. Thank you.

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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 1999-07-21 04:58 PM

A great example of a pleaful dialogue from an embittered man toward his woman (wife?) WELL DONE!

Rita
Member

since 1999-07-19

Posts 55
Danville Va. 24540

4 posted 1999-07-21 05:53 PM

thanks for the high opinion .means much coming from you.

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

5 posted 1999-07-21 06:38 PM

Thanks one and all for your responses.

Sir WOW: Your remarks are a boon. Although I've put words to paper off and on, I've only been serious about it these past six months.

Sunshine: I've enjoyed several of your's as well. Thanks for coming by.

Balladeer: Your every word is an inspiration. I thank you for taking the time and energy to respond to nearly all my postings. You are one of the best!

Rita: Thanks for coming by, credit where credit due.

P.S. I love my wife dearly, and she loves me. Our dance is a beauty to behold.

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

6 posted 1999-07-21 06:48 PM

the tongue can sometimes be the mightiest weapon of them all...enjoyed your poem

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If I had my mouth I would bite. If I had my liberty I would do my liking. In the mean time, let me be that I am, and seek not to alter me. ~~~Shakespeare~~~

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

7 posted 1999-07-21 07:55 PM

Thank you dear Elvira. You have done more than most to elevate this site. Your efforts are much appreciated.

Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

8 posted 1999-07-21 08:01 PM

Very good Andrew. I enjoyed it very much.

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