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One night that lasts forever

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Rita
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Danville Va. 24540


0 posted 07-21-99 12:06 PM       View Profile for Rita   Email Rita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rita

The lights of the city finally fad,
As two people by fate, cross each other's path.
He loooked in her eyes, and found true beauty,
as she fell in love with the words, that sung from his mouth.
He kissed her cheek, then embraced her in his arms,
then he kissed upon her lips.
she found it impossible to stand, for loved engulfed her heart and body
they entered to an immortal embrace,
as their limbs tangled in emotion.
the world may have stopped, but time kept going,
as tears filled their eyes
with hardened hearts, they looked at each other
as he kissed her one last time.
she knew she would never, forget that moment,
as he knew he found the definition of perfect.
She left her ring, and then on her bed she layed.
He wrote he an ode, and slipped it under the door,
as he turned and walked away.

[This message has been edited by Rita (edited 07-21-99).]

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Delores Hall
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1 posted 07-21-99 02:29 PM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

Rita very nicely written. The name fits the poem.
Sundance
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2 posted 07-21-99 02:41 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

That is soo sad! Love that poem! keep 'em comin'!

Danleigh4
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I loved your poem!
 
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