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Open Poetry #1

Becoming Indiana

mia
Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 118

0 posted 1999-07-21 09:51 AM

A new adventure awaits,
and so I leave
while you sleep.
I am Indiana now
and tonight,
I want to explore
the vast territory
of your body.
I will swim
in the deep of your eyes
holding breath
as long as I can
to find all
the lost treasures
I will rest
in the oasis of your mouth
taking comfort
in the safety
of your lips
I will descend
the steep fall of your neck
from here
there is no horizon,
simply passions
to no ends
I will sail
the waves of your chest
slowly rocked
by the sweet lullaby
of your breath
I will lose myself
in your jungle
and then climb your peak,
from here I see
extasy
Slide...
then I will return home
to your arms
because no adventure
is greater
that our love

mia

Poetwheel
Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 208
Canada

1 posted 1999-07-21 10:08 AM

Very nice Mia, very beautiful imagery. Nice job.

PW

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-07-21 10:12 AM

This poem paints a beautiful picture of giving oneself to another completely. I enjoyed the visuals of this one.

Delores Hall
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 342
USA

3 posted 1999-07-21 10:54 AM

Oh to be in love is a wonderful thing.Nice going Mia.

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