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Becoming Indiana

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mia
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0 posted 07-21-99 09:51 AM       View Profile for mia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for mia

A new adventure awaits,
and so I leave
while you sleep.
I am Indiana now
and tonight,
I want to explore
the vast territory
of your body.
I will swim
in the deep of your eyes
holding breath
as long as I can
to find all
the lost treasures
I will rest
in the oasis of your mouth
taking comfort
in the safety
of your lips
I will descend
the steep fall of your neck
from here
there is no horizon,
simply passions
to no ends
I will sail
the waves of your chest
slowly rocked
by the sweet lullaby
of your breath
I will lose myself
in your jungle
and then climb your peak,
from here I see
extasy
Slide...
then I will return home
to your arms
because no adventure
is greater
that our love

mia
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Poetwheel
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1 posted 07-21-99 10:08 AM       View Profile for Poetwheel   Email Poetwheel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Poetwheel's Home Page   View IP for Poetwheel

Very nice Mia, very beautiful imagery. Nice job.

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hoot_owl_rn
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This poem paints a beautiful picture of giving oneself to another completely. I enjoyed the visuals of this one.
Delores Hall
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Oh to be in love is a wonderful thing.Nice going Mia.
 
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