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r. baker33
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since 07-03-99
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glen easton wv


0 posted 07-21-99 03:44 AM       View Profile for r. baker33   Email r. baker33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit r. baker33's Home Page   View IP for r. baker33

I did'nt see the knife comming from out of
your pocket. did you feel it as it cut
through the flesh in my back?did you even
take the time to see the look in my eyes as
you slowly twisted the blade.I can tell you
that look of hurt,and pain. the feeling of
betrayal.when you turned to walk away did
you feel it? the better question is will
you ever feel it? you may be gone,but I will
remember still.the reality is that in our
world there are two types of people.
those that care,and those that need cared
for.which one do you fall under?
that is something I may never know.
your gone,but you'll never be forgotten.
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Dragon
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since 07-14-99
Posts 139
Highmount,NY ,USA


1 posted 07-21-99 03:50 AM       View Profile for Dragon   Email Dragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon

Beautiful free verse! Well done !
r. baker33
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glen easton wv


2 posted 07-21-99 03:56 AM       View Profile for r. baker33   Email r. baker33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit r. baker33's Home Page   View IP for r. baker33

I just wanted to say thanks.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


3 posted 07-21-99 10:33 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wow!! Very intense. It's one of those poems that you just want to say...why? I couldn't read it without answering the questions or asking the questions myself. Funny how we can find some that we really relate to, this is one. Thanks!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Delores Hall
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since 07-16-99
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4 posted 07-21-99 11:20 AM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

This is different.Kind of dark.
r. baker33
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glen easton wv


5 posted 07-22-99 01:16 AM       View Profile for r. baker33   Email r. baker33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit r. baker33's Home Page   View IP for r. baker33

I just wanted again to say thanks for the
replies. just one note.this poem is meant
to convey lessons learned from a real life
experience.
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