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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Wondrous, Elvira, verse balanced in rhyme and form. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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Dragon Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 138Highmount,NY ,USA |
Very nicely done! |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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Starfish Junior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 34New Zealand |
Fantastic poem! I like how you use the page. |
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Poetwheel Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 208Canada |
Nice Poem and Nice Eye Candy. Good job! PW ------------------ Poetic Wheelbarrow http://www.stormloader.com/poetwheel/den.html ICQ: 44370408 |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
we love you elvira!!! thank you for liftin some of my poems for more to see not to mention how i feel to see that you enjoyed them..nice poem too love the layout centering and content |
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ac Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 129Cayey, PR - USA |
i love the form that you've given to the words...giving them a unique way of standing out ... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
EXCELLENT FORM!!!! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Elvira, you more than any other member, has taken the time to read through the past postings and bring back some 'oldies but goodies'. I want to commend you for that. A lot of people who post just want to see their name/their poem and don't take the time to do what you are doing. When you get to the beginning, you will see some names that no longer post. Could it be due to lack of response? We all want our poems to be read and appreciated and as humans, we get discouraged and may go elsewhere to find the recognition we need. I think it's important to recognize the 'little quiet' poems as well as the more popular ones that get 10 or more replies. (Sorry didn't mean to get on my soapbox). I appreciate what you're doing.  |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Elvira, I truly appreciate you and am proud to be a fellow member of yours. You take the time and you care. You are a very kind and giving person. Thank you. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
You represent the best of what can be found here. Not just in words, but in deeds. I bow before you with gratitude and humble thanks for your efforts. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I would also like to say thanks for your time and effort, I try myself to do the same, just last night I decided for every time I am here i am gonna try and bring at least one out from being buried. Your talent here is also valuable as seen here in this poem and your many others. We can all learn from one another. |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Elvira, The only one who takes the time To visually create a rhyme And in the process bids us keep In touch with poems buried deep Thanks! sandman |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
You must dabble more often! You gave us a treat. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wonderful little piece. And wonderful job on revealing some of the buried treasures here also. I try to help out when I can also. Thank you so much!!  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter |
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Ron
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US |
You do, indeed, perform a wonderful service, elvira, and write darn good poetry to boot! Of course, I wouldn't want you to get bored now that you've completed your self-appointed task. If the poets here can't keep up with your voracious appetite you'll find, oh, about 3,000 more poems at the main site. And, yes, you can post comments (vote) there, too. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Sweets....if I could write what I think...no, wait a minute...that would be rated X or mostly wouldn't make sense.....Ummmm?....I know.....If I could put into words what most of you true poets do here....I could be a wealthy poet....as many of you could be. Of course, I understand Poetry doesn't sell very well....it's a shame what people are missing....don't ya think? |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
To read and understand is a way to extend your hand When reaching out is by words alone I think this place could well be home.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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