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elvira
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0 posted 07-21-99 03:19 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for elvira



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DreamEvil
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1 posted 07-21-99 03:24 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Wondrous, Elvira, verse balanced in rhyme and form.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvilŠ


Dragon
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2 posted 07-21-99 03:47 AM       View Profile for Dragon   Email Dragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon

Very nicely done!
elvira
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3 posted 07-21-99 03:58 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira



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Starfish
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since 07-20-99
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4 posted 07-21-99 07:18 AM       View Profile for Starfish   Email Starfish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starfish

Fantastic poem! I like how you use the page.
Poetwheel
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5 posted 07-21-99 07:34 AM       View Profile for Poetwheel   Email Poetwheel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Poetwheel's Home Page   View IP for Poetwheel

Nice Poem and Nice Eye Candy. Good job!

PW

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wayoutwalt
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since 06-22-99
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TEXAS (it's all big)


6 posted 07-21-99 08:01 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

we love you elvira!!! thank you for liftin some of my poems for more to see not to mention how i feel to see that you enjoyed them..nice poem too love the layout centering and content
ac
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7 posted 07-21-99 08:17 AM       View Profile for ac   Email ac   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ac

i love the form that you've given to the words...giving them a unique way of standing out ...
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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8 posted 07-21-99 10:20 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

EXCELLENT FORM!!!!
Poet deVine
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9 posted 07-21-99 10:35 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Elvira, you more than any other member, has taken the time to read through the past postings and bring back some 'oldies but goodies'. I want to commend you for that. A lot of people who post just want to see their name/their poem and don't take the time to do what you are doing. When you get to the beginning, you will see some names that no longer post. Could it be due to lack of response? We all want our poems to be read and appreciated and as humans, we get discouraged and may go elsewhere to find the recognition we need. I think it's important to recognize the 'little quiet' poems as well as the more popular ones that get 10 or more replies. (Sorry didn't mean to get on my soapbox). I appreciate what you're doing.
elvira
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10 posted 07-21-99 07:04 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira



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Balladeer
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11 posted 07-21-99 07:21 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Elvira, I truly appreciate you and am proud to be a fellow member of yours. You take the time and you care. You are a very kind and giving person. Thank you.
Andrew Scott
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since 06-24-99
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12 posted 07-21-99 07:44 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

You represent the best of what can be found here. Not just in words, but in deeds. I bow before you with gratitude and humble thanks for your efforts.
Lost Dreamer
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since 06-20-99
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13 posted 07-21-99 07:53 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

I would also like to say thanks for your time and effort, I try myself to do the same, just last night I decided for every time I am here i am gonna try and bring at least one out from being buried. Your talent here is also valuable as seen here in this poem and your many others. We can all learn from one another.
Fred Hobbs
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since 06-08-99
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14 posted 07-21-99 09:20 PM       View Profile for Fred Hobbs   Email Fred Hobbs   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Fred Hobbs's Home Page   View IP for Fred Hobbs

Elvira,

The only one who takes the time
To visually create a rhyme
And in the process bids us keep
In touch with poems buried deep

Thanks!
sandman
elvira
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15 posted 07-21-99 10:20 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira



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Ohme
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16 posted 07-21-99 10:26 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme


You must dabble more often! You gave us a treat.
elvira
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elvira
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18 posted 07-25-99 10:05 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira



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Alwye
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since 06-16-99
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In the space between moments


19 posted 07-25-99 10:20 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wonderful little piece. And wonderful job on
revealing some of the buried treasures here also. I try to help out when I can also. Thank you so much!!

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*Krista Knutson*

"It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter
Ron
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20 posted 07-25-99 10:26 PM       View Profile for Ron   Email Ron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ron's Home Page   View IP for Ron

You do, indeed, perform a wonderful service, elvira, and write darn good poetry to boot!

Of course, I wouldn't want you to get bored now that you've completed your self-appointed task. If the poets here can't keep up with your voracious appetite you'll find, oh, about 3,000 more poems at the main site. And, yes, you can post comments (vote) there, too.

elvira
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21 posted 07-25-99 10:53 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira



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elvira
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22 posted 07-31-99 08:27 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira



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Toerag
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since 07-29-99
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Ala bam a


23 posted 07-31-99 10:21 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Sweets....if I could write what I think...no, wait a minute...that would be rated X or mostly wouldn't make sense.....Ummmm?....I know.....If I could put into words what most of you true poets do here....I could be a wealthy poet....as many of you could be. Of course, I understand Poetry doesn't sell very well....it's a shame what people are missing....don't ya think?
elvira
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24 posted 07-31-99 10:24 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira



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