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Open Poetry #1

First touch

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

0 posted 1999-07-20 11:58 PM

FIRST TOUCH

The heartbeat echos…
The blood runs through.
Your hand…
In my hand…
I feel you

The darkness covers…
The breath is slow.
Your touch…
To my touch…
Passions flow

The silence creeps in…
The memories fade.
Your soul…
Finds my soul…
A bond is made

~ Angela Erin Burke ~

Dedicated to Dragon, the child of the night

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-07-21 12:01 PM

I like this one. Is it for someone special?

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

Dragon
Member

since 1999-07-14

Posts 138
Highmount,NY ,USA

2 posted 1999-07-21 12:02 PM

Excellent! Thank-You Lady Fair

Cinderella
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 152
Arizona

3 posted 1999-07-21 12:38 PM

Enjoyed!

Starfish
Junior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 34
New Zealand

4 posted 1999-07-21 07:44 AM

Great poem!

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

5 posted 1999-07-21 09:54 AM

thanks everybody, Dream..........consider yourself special, Dragon, heres one for you. :-)

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 1999-07-21 10:19 AM

Very nice!

Rita
Member

since 1999-07-19

Posts 55
Danville Va. 24540

7 posted 1999-07-21 05:36 PM

breathtaking..........

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