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Forget me not |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas 
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FORGET ME NOT Forget me not I am named My wild spirit Won't be tamed Those who've tried Have been burned For me no man has yearned Will you try sir Will you try My wings are strong and I will fly you see me now proud and bold so you think me harsh and cold But If you saw my frightened spirit You'd leave in pity I could not bear it So I say you won't come near me The price of pride Costs too dearly. ~ Angela Erin Burke ~ ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
NOT bad at all, I like this piece. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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Dragon Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 138Highmount,NY ,USA |
You are unforgettable! Nicely done. |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
what better compliment is there other than to be unforgetable? Thank you both. ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
:-) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
A nice poem. I enjoyed the concept behind this one...the flow was smooth and it went together nicely. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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