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Saxoness
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0 posted 07-20-99 11:08 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Saxoness

FORGET ME NOT


Forget me not
I am named

My wild spirit
Won't be tamed

Those who've tried
Have been burned

For me no man has yearned

Will you try sir
Will you try

My wings are strong
and I will fly

you see me now
proud and bold

so you think me
harsh and cold

But

If you saw my frightened spirit
You'd leave in pity

I could not bear it

So I say you won't come near me

The price of pride

Costs too dearly.

~ Angela Erin Burke ~


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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

© Copyright 1999 Angela Erin Burke - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 07-20-99 11:19 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

NOT bad at all, I like this piece.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
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2 posted 07-20-99 11:31 PM       View Profile for Dragon   Email Dragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon

You are unforgettable! Nicely done.
Saxoness
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what better compliment is there other than to be unforgetable? Thank you both.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

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4 posted 07-21-99 09:57 AM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

:-)
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 07-21-99 10:17 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

A nice poem. I enjoyed the concept behind this one...the flow was smooth and it went together nicely.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
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