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ShyGrl135
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since 07-20-99
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0 posted 07-20-99 09:16 PM       View Profile for ShyGrl135   Email ShyGrl135   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ShyGrl135


Go easy on me, I haven't written in a while.
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Blurred Visions,
deeper meanings, and
greater intentions
are what i could not see.
Swallowed by an invisable wall for years
caused my feelings to be shunned out, pushed aside and easily ignored.
Now that, that invisable wall has been lifted
my vision has cleared, and my heart and mind have openes.
I now realize how much he meant to me
now, it's to late to turn back time.
The past is the past and the future has yet to come.
Will I see him again? I may never know
and now its too late to tell him so.
All the weight that invisable wall has dropped on me
is weighing me down,
stealing my stregth,
and winning this emotional fight I can't seem to get under control.
His memories invade my mind,
His touch lingers on my skin,
and his voice echos in my ears.
I think about him constantly
and wonder, if he too, can now see clearly....


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Heres a Quote:
"Of all the sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: it might have been"
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Delores Hall
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since 07-16-99
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1 posted 07-20-99 09:38 PM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

Welcome shy girl. This is nice for someone who hasn't wrote in a while.
Poet deVine
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2 posted 07-20-99 11:18 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! You've got some really great stuff in this poem (one note, you may want to spell check a little)..other wise it's good for someone who's been out of the saddle for awhile...throw us another one!

 
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