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Tranquility

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Lost Dreamer
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Tranquility "(C)" Lost Dreamer 04/98

When I gaze into the sea
it tranquilizes me.
The distance I can see
seems like eternity.
My mind floats to a place
free of life's busy pace.
I sit down now
water touching my toes.
I ponder how much
I really know.
For while I'm here
feeling tranquilized,
someone, somewhere
is being brutalized.
I wish the world
could join hands,
and gather round the sea
Then all could feel
tranquility through
life's eternity.
© Copyright 1999 RiaL - All Rights Reserved
Ohme
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1 posted 07-20-99 09:07 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

You touched me, I wish so too.
Rita
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2 posted 07-21-99 05:55 PM       View Profile for Rita   Email Rita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rita

simple in form, yet complex in definition......head bowed in admiration
Andrew Scott
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Reality is the byproduct of dreams. I'm with you on this one. Well done.
Lost Dreamer
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4 posted 07-21-99 11:33 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

My heart-felt thanks reach out to all of you. Your compliments are much appreciated.
wayoutwalt
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tranquil yes the word for this poem i love it i needed calmin
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