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Open Poetry #1

Eye of the Storm

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

0 posted 1999-07-20 08:06 PM

I sense my lovers approach
in the distant rolling thunder.
Her sweet scent like rain
hangs musty in the air.
I feel the end of calm as
her passion washes over me.
Though I live in a world of darkness,
I need no eyes to see,
The lightening pass between us
as my lover....loves me.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 1999-07-20 08:30 PM

Ah, one of my favorite subjects....rain. Check out my new posting Your Storm.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Dragon
Member

since 1999-07-14

Posts 138
Highmount,NY ,USA

2 posted 1999-07-20 08:34 PM

I love the darkness and lightening! Nice work.

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

3 posted 1999-07-20 08:44 PM

Excellent! I enjoyed this one. Thanks for sharing.

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

4 posted 1999-08-09 01:31 AM

Great!! I love storms, and this was wonderful!!

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

5 posted 1999-08-09 10:33 AM

Thank you all for your generous encouragement.

INclan

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