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Unafordable Treasures

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Ohme
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since 07-17-99
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Texas


0 posted 07-20-99 07:58 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Ohme

You asked for wealth
I gave you sun.
Its glory to behold.
But with a frown
you turned it down
and never saw it's gold.

You asked for beauty
so I plucked
a blossom from a tree
Then with a sigh
you passed it by
for you saw only me.

You asked of me
so many things,
demands I could not meet.
Though I would try
my love did lie
one step beneath you feet.
© Copyright 1999 Lorene Meadows - All Rights Reserved
Andrew Scott
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since 06-24-99
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1 posted 07-20-99 08:09 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Another fine offering. You have a great talent. That must have been one hard hearted person not to know the treasure to be found under foot.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


2 posted 07-20-99 08:23 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wow....I really loved this piece of work. The format was great, rhyme and rythym very well done and it flows with the grace of a gentle stream!! Thank you for sharing, looking forward to more of the same.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Dragon
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3 posted 07-20-99 08:37 PM       View Profile for Dragon   Email Dragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon

There are none so blind as those how will not see.great writing!
~one voice~
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since 07-08-99
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Billings, MT USA


4 posted 07-20-99 08:42 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Once again, a wonderful piece! All I can say is: Ohme, oh my! hehehehehehe

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."

 
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